Mr Judge Feedback - Provisional Mark/Level/Grade: Level 4: 17/20

• Medal: An exceptional blog, with exceptional detail, well into Level 4. Congratulations on all your hard work thus far. 

• Mission: Mind map needs straightening, Most of your images are very small, check the size at home, especially the Seven ones, they could do with being larger as can your production schedule/risk assessments etc
• As you make your film you could add 'production diary' entries that talk us through the challenges of making your film, we could also do with some images from the set, even video clips from when you filmed to give us a sense of the whole production process. 

Your current  interim grade is a firm level 4: (16/20) As you finish your posts including the evaluation, early film edits, final edit, this should increase. 

• Planning and research evidence will be complete and detailed;

• There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience;

• There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;

• There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding;

• There is an excellent level of care in the presentation of the research and planning

• Time management is excellent.

Please provide feedback, in the form of a new post, how and when you hope to achieve the tasks. 

	MINIMAL (L1)	BASIC (L2)	PROFICIENT (L3)	EXCELLENT (L4)	TOTAL
1.RESEARCH & PLANNING [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20	17/20
2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK [40]	0-23	24-35	36-47	48-60
3.EVALUATION [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20
TOTAL GRADE FOR FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]					/100
Minus -39 = U	40-49 = E	50-59 = D	60-69 = C	70-79 = B	80-100 = A